follow-up on “remor, remar la mar . . .”

Hi guys! I’m still puzzling over this but have attempted to work it out using “row.” I’ve mainly centered it on the permutation of “row” (and especially the “w”) and not the sound (good god, I’ve been thinking about what Raquel mentioned about the sonic reading producing more words and it’s just amazing and untranslatable).

So with that in mind, what do you think about this:

waves in roll, that row in worship, row the sea of swollen sea and awe and morrow

Eh? Ehhh?

Meg

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